with a splash by annied

with a splash

as you sit
and stare
and wonder what's there
your mind is at ease
in a place
and a time
where the waters were smooth
and your heart was at peace
then in rolls the ocean
hitting the cliffs
and SPLASH!
it is gone........................................
Captures how I feel stiff by the waters edge Annie, however, I see and feel the breakers as an extension to the moment, strengthening them rather than destroying :-)
July 6th, 2015  
Stood not stiff ....lol
July 6th, 2015  
@phil_howcroft I will think about that Phil :)
July 6th, 2015  
the contrast of of the light on the rocks with the shaded parts really complements the poem as well as the splash.
July 6th, 2015  
@phil_howcroft oh that's good - I thought you were scared lol
July 6th, 2015  
@annied yes lol , my first post did read a tad confusing , surprising how one word can can make the post different , I blame predictive text words on smart phones, either that or frued
July 6th, 2015  
@phil_howcroft hahaha definitely Frued LOL
and I will say sometimes the breakers are extensions sometimes they wreck it
July 6th, 2015  
Great shot, I love the spray in the sunlight.
July 6th, 2015  
@karlow75 it was a lovely afternoon to be on the coast
July 6th, 2015  
Well shotted and focused shot.
July 6th, 2015  
There's something so majestic about the waves crashing into the cliffs, and your shot perfectly captures that.
July 6th, 2015  
@kwind @dolphin thanks Kim and Molly - I could sit and watch the oxean for hours - would love to live where you do Kim :)
July 6th, 2015  
Fabulous shot. I just love living by the ocean. Something different to see every time you go there.
July 6th, 2015  
@onewing yes it is beautiful
July 6th, 2015  
Great action shot with amazing colors
July 7th, 2015  
The sun looks lovely on that big splash.
July 7th, 2015  
I like the splash, the sunlight and your verse.
July 7th, 2015  
Wahey! Wind and water in action.
July 7th, 2015  
The lightings on the rocks are super!
July 8th, 2015  
@yeshanghai @888rachel @quietpurplehaze @will_wooderson @yaorenliu
thank you so much for taking the time to visit
truly appreciated :)
July 8th, 2015  
I like the way you captured the wave here, very zen
July 8th, 2015  
Spectacular!
July 8th, 2015  
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