Take 2 on Senior Photo

So what I did was carefully use the brush tool around her head and body first to eliminate the blue cast. I did try to use White Balance first, but it was doing it for the entire shot. Not sure if I took out too much of the blues, and I am wondering if my edits are too obvious to the eye. Is this an improvement?

First edit: https://365project.org/darylo/2018-focus-on-e/2018-02-19

[Sue Hecker]

Wow, what a difference. To my eyes, it looks great. The focus is on the cute girl.

[Jane Pittenger]

Did you use the masking option? It's much better but I bet with the mask on you could get rid of the rest. She is such a beauty and it captures her so nicely it would be worth it.If you want, you could send me the full sized file and I could do it in PS for you...or I could talk you through it maybe

[katy]

A vast improvement. All the more meaningful because you did it yourself

[Pam Knowler]

What such a lovely portrait! She is so beautiful and clever too! You must be so proud of her!

[Taffy]

I'm guessing if you enlarged it a bit you could get a little more of the blue out from around her legs. But overall, it's much much better!

[Danette Thompson]

Looking on my iPad, this is much better. Your edits are not overdone.

[Daryl O'Hare]

@jgpittenger thank you! Yes, the masking option is engaged. I don't have PS, so that is the problem. If you do not mind me sending youu the file, I would trust your judgement and expertise!

[Jane Pittenger]

@darylo sure. [e-mail]

[Rachel]

Yes! This is much better. Well done.

[Jane Pittenger]

Never got the file

[Daryl O'Hare]

@jgpittenger sorry, I haven't gotten to it!