Please critique this!

September 23rd, 2015
I am currently doing a self-portrait 365 project. I have been posting random photos on this site for two years...I just finally figured it was time to do a more structured series.

This is #23 of 365 in my self portrait series entitled "Harmonica Man"



I went for more of a surreal look than I usually do. But anyway, what do you guys think? What could I do to improve this look?

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Hope you have a great day!

Taylor B

www.thetokenphoto.com
September 23rd, 2015
I can't help much with this but have you seen Tee Gar? He does amazing self portraits and has tutorials on YouTube.
September 23rd, 2015
I feel as though the space is too confined. There are so many elements in such a small space that your eye doesn't know where to look first. Personally, My eye immediately drifted to the shadow on the left.
September 24th, 2015
mysterious mood
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