What would you do with this photo,,,redone. Better or not?

[Peggy Scroggins]

I took out the lines in the tile floor, Cropped out her skirt, left off the writing and did it in sepia. I think it got the feel I was going for better. Any other suggestions? Just remember, I am not that good at this yet, don't make it to hard lol. Thanks for all the great help.

[Mannie]

You've really zoned in on the important aspects of this photo. No distractions. Pure and simple. Well done.

[Evita]

I agree. This is a very direct but interesting. Great Job!

[Françoise]

Looks brilliant - less is definitely more in this instance.

[Chuck]

Good Job!

[Peggy Scroggins]

@mbemis @totallyevita @kiwiflora @neosec Thank you for all the help.