Ruby by gosia

Ruby

I am preparing myself for children portraits' photography but in the meantime, Ruby, a young friend, offered to be a model.
It’s a really beautiful portrait. If you are open to critique I would definitely crop out the structure top left and I think you have space to do that and keep the composition.
January 30th, 2020  
You have constructed this portrait beautifully including the backdrop. Ruby is a lovely model. I would like to see some more work with her and her hair flowing free somehow.
January 30th, 2020  
A lovely portrait of your gorgeous friend. Fabulous composition and dof, I tend to agree with Hazel as that structure is rather disturbing ;-)
January 30th, 2020  
sweet fav
January 30th, 2020  
This is so well done, Gosia! You can use this for advertising it's so good! I rather like that structure in the background because it gives depth and makes the scene feel more natural. I love your DoF play a lot. I wonder -- if you might try a couple of poses where her right hand is less defined in how it's posed against her hair -- that's the only thing that looks posed to me. But really, GREAT JOB!
January 30th, 2020  
You're off to a great start Gosia, this is lovely. The dof is beautiful.
January 30th, 2020  
This is beautiful Gosia, I love the DOF, composition and I also like the structure in the background. I would be very happy to receive a portrait like this of my child. Good luck with your new adventure.
January 30th, 2020  
beautiful composition!
January 30th, 2020  
Lovely portrait!
January 30th, 2020  
A beautiful model capture.
January 30th, 2020  
@quietpurplehaze thank you, it is a good point.
January 31st, 2020  
@jyokota Thank you for you commnet, I appreciate it very much.
January 31st, 2020  
@ethelperry Thank you
January 31st, 2020  
Wonderful work -- it's a great portrait in context.
January 31st, 2020  
Beautiful use of dof and glow
January 31st, 2020  
Pretty portrait with great DOF!
January 31st, 2020  
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