Makeway for Batman by helenhall

Makeway for Batman

Composition: Rule of Space
Your subject should be facing the frame, walking into the frame, this keeps your subject "in" the frame and engaging with it. Give your subject room to move.

I have been struggling with this all week. Spent many minutes in various places waiting for my subject to appear and oblige. In the end, this is the only shot that came close to meeting the brief. I didn't really want to use selective colour, but what do you know, for a long time the bridge was completely empty, and then as soon as my subject comes into the frame, there appear to be many other people appearing at the back and obscuring him from behind.

Little Batman is my favourite - love his expression. Keep going - so frustrating when the wrong people get in the way.
April 15th, 2018  
While I love the long leading line in this picture, a tighter crop would have helped him too. I did a 52 week challenge last year and they can be frustrating at times but I think you're doing rather well with it!
April 15th, 2018  
Aww, I think it's nice, I used sc as I couldn't see a way of pulling the viewers eye towards the person because of the distance involved.
April 15th, 2018  
I like the shadows, they pull you towards the little batman.
April 15th, 2018  
Oh I love the little batman. It reminds me of when I was about the same age and my auntie made a batman suit for my brother. I got to be robin with a duster for a cape!
April 15th, 2018  
You cracked this one! Poor little chap is trying so hard to keep up. Lovely sweeping shadows.
April 15th, 2018  
you got the brief perfectly! i like that your two subjects are moving towards the camera, one through the straight shadow/lines and the other seemingly guided by the curved shadow, both heading for the same point in the frame. if my comment doesn't make sense, ignore me. i'm just babbling.
April 15th, 2018  
Cool sc
April 15th, 2018  
@summerfield makes perfect sense. I wanted my subjects to be bound by the shadow from the bridge, but for some odd reason, everyone that came along moved across to the other side. Cant think why me standing there with a camera would put them off! If I had waited any longer they would have started to steer a course around me.
April 15th, 2018  
@domenicododaro cheers
@fbailey to be honest - the shadows are why I wanted the photograph - thanks
@suzanne234 weren't you the lucky one! strange how these childhood grievances stay with us
@overalvandaan thank you - I was hoping they might
@stephanies I spotted that you had done a similar thing. Tricky challenge.
@olivetreeann thank you very much Ann. I can see you are right - but I really wanted the shadows. Perhaps not loyal enough to the theme.
@flowerfairyann thanks for the encouragement
April 15th, 2018  
nice perspective
April 16th, 2018  
I gave up and went with dog instead of person. I like the sc in this. The child is such a bright spot.
April 16th, 2018  
Well done - love the perspective and pop of colour.
April 16th, 2018  
You cracked it here with great leading lines and wit!
April 16th, 2018  
excellent composition
April 16th, 2018  
Excellent shot. Not only are policemen and doctors looking young these days, even Batman is looking young too.
April 16th, 2018  
haha this shot & title made me really 'laugh out loud' ..... reminded me of that clip from Only Fools & Horses !!
April 16th, 2018  
A very lovely composition
April 22nd, 2018  
Great idea to give the boy some color. Like it. The bended shadow line is leading the viewer perfectly.
April 23rd, 2018  
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