Osprey with Fish reedit

As per Rachel and Daryl's suggesions, I reedited this cleaning up the sloppy masking job on wing tips and cropping a bit from the top.
What do you think? Better?

[👑 AnaZad]

Wow, fabulous capture. FAV.

[Helene]

awesome timing! what a picture.fabulous capture for both of you: the bird and you. fav

[Pat Knowles]

It was a great photo. Effort Jane but you have upped the charity & simplicity to great effect!

[Daryl O'Hare]

Crop is perfect. The wing tips on left still have some hot spots and right ever so slight between the fingers/feathers.

[Graeme Stevens]

Awesome shot

[Lori Jane]

Have not seen the earlier version yet, but this one is stunning.

[Allison Maltese]

Pretty ambitious and a great capture.

[Anita Campbell]

Quite the fisherman!!! Great timely capture of this big guy and his dinner.

[Dawn]

Stunning capture

[Milanie]

The slight cropping really makes him pretty awesome - coming right at you. Wouldn't have realized how much difference that could make. Nicely done.

[Marnie]

I thought the original was stunning, this one's even better. Fav.

[Cathie]

Fabulous capture.

[Margo]

Brilliant capture A FAV

[Rachel]

Excellent and very dramatic. I can still see the pier through the wing tips on the left, but I feel picky pointing it out.

[Jane Pittenger]

@888rachel I totally appreciate your attention to detail and helpful critique