Your Mistake by kerosene

Your Mistake

Think you can lock me up,
Think you can bring me down?
When my indomitable will is the talk of the town?

Are you not aware I am relentless?
A resolve stronger than your bars of steel,
And I'll soon uncover your Achilles’ heel.

Your perception of my detention
Will be your weakness when I finally attack
I will be merciless as you meet payback.
Awesome shot! Wow. I love the detail in the eyes.
January 1st, 2016  
Instant fav, love it, excellent detail in the eyes
January 1st, 2016  
This photo sent chills down my spine. Even without the text. Very powerful.
January 1st, 2016  
Wow, this is so awesome! Love those big brown eyes.
January 1st, 2016  
@ludgate thanks very much Megan! I'm upset I didn't get the bars very well in this one but this was a better shot than others with bars in...
@graemestevens well shucks, thank you sir, I believe you inspire such shots!
@vera365 oh that's very kind of you to say Vera, thank you!
@kategoring thank you Kate, I am blushing!! :)
January 1st, 2016  
Those eyes are wild! Great shot
January 2nd, 2016  
I hope you did not cut your nose for this shot. But it is so real and the amount of tears1
January 2nd, 2016  
!
January 2nd, 2016  
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant....fav
January 2nd, 2016  
Oh wow, I love the intensity in this! Awesome shot!
January 2nd, 2016  
This is powerful
January 2nd, 2016  
touches something deep inside me
January 2nd, 2016  
what Taffy said... powerful
January 2nd, 2016  
@carla42 thank you dear Carla, I am glad you're back and staying! :)
@yaorenliu I am glad it looks real hehe! It's liquid lipstick :) and I sprayed my face with water. The fun!
@wenbow thank you kindly miss Wendy :)
@emrob thanks very much Mandy!
@taffy thanks Taffy :)
@kali66 well I am honored Kali...
@northy thanks Northy!
January 2nd, 2016  
Aaaaawesome you lovely lady! :)
January 2nd, 2016  
Now that is serious! AWESOME!
January 3rd, 2016  
I agree with Taffy & Northy, very, very powerful. Congrats on PP.
January 3rd, 2016  
@agentzuckerguss haha thanks dear Katia!
@pagand314 thanks David, not sure what got into me on New Year's Day...
@bill_fe thanks very much Bill :)
January 4th, 2016  
Rocked it. This is powerfully done and told!
January 5th, 2016  
@amandal thanks Amanda, very kind of you! :)
January 5th, 2016  
Seems the is scope for a poetry club here on 365. great poem and image. :)
January 7th, 2016  
@swillinbillyflynn thanks very much kind sir, and yes I was happy to see yours! Aside from a questionable attempt at a haiku, I do believe this is my first go at one on here...
January 8th, 2016  
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