I like this cropping for showing the beautiful line of the back and the muscular ness of the shoulders. I wonder if you might try a second cropping that features the silhouette of his head against the beautiful background? The lighting is so nice that it might be a good second framing.
@jyokota thank you for your comment Junko, the crop indeed works but the image quality suffers, due to crop-sensor, high ISO and the image not being tack-sharp