Everything in her line of vision was blurred... by marlboromaam

Everything in her line of vision was blurred...

Blood from her head wound streamed down her face. She knew she was in serious trouble with the dizziness bordering on loss of consciousness. Her thoughts were shear panic as she struggled and stumbled toward the house... "I just need to get to the door! Someone must be home!" Out of breath and weakened from her injuries, she collapsed on the ground and felt the cold, damp softness of the grass between her fingers before she blacked out...

Enough drama and mystery for the day? For the OOF challenge. This one was a little more inspiring than my little OOF car. =)
Well that had me gripped. Let’s hope all ended well.
February 1st, 2021  
@wakelys Thank you very, very much, Susan! I was hoping some of my 365 friends would add to this little mystery. =)
February 1st, 2021  
Lovely image. Love the narrative. What happened next?
February 1st, 2021  
@njmom3 Thank you, Nada! Maybe you can tell me?
February 1st, 2021  
@marlboromaam In that case, she recovered completely and lived happily ever after. :)
February 1st, 2021  
Cool shot and I liked your narrative, too, and I also hope it ends well.
February 1st, 2021  
@njmom3 LOL! Okay. =)

@mittens Thank you, Marilyn!
February 1st, 2021  
This is pretty neat and I love the narrative!
February 1st, 2021  
@milaniet Thank you very, very much, Milanie!
February 1st, 2021  
Wow - what a great photo to go with that great narrative!!!
February 2nd, 2021  
@linnypinny Aww! Thank you very much, Lin!
February 2nd, 2021  
she hears the faint sounds of sirens mingled with voices, high pitched, low pitched voices, panicked and grief stricken. but she sees nothing. she feels nothing. only the sounds and voices, sometimes faint, sometimes loud. then a pin-prick light somewhere. "i need to get help. must get help." suddenly a voice she recognizes, calling her name. but she can't place it. she screams "help! help me!" and she stares at the tiny dot of light. then silence. then nothing.

sorry, can't help it. i probably will come back to this. we used to do this in my writing group a long time ago. it's interesting where each writer would take the story.
February 2nd, 2021  
@summerfield This is EXACTLY what I was hoping for! I think you've done very well! It was sort of a continuation of my blurred tree shot story. =)
February 2nd, 2021  
@summerfield, love you guys! I had so much fun reading this.
February 2nd, 2021  
Fabulous blurry shot and great narrative! Vikki just cracked me up with the continuation of the story ;-)
February 2nd, 2021  
Nicely done, and great narrative!
February 2nd, 2021  
This is a really nice shot Mags. Great narrative, you could write a book
February 2nd, 2021  
@dutchothotmailcom Love you too, Esther!

@ludwigsdiana Thank you, Diana!

@aikiuser Thank you, Jenn!

@kjarn Thank you, Kathy! I could start one. LOL! But would never finish it.
February 2nd, 2021  
@marlboromaam - i have another thought on this. i don't know where you're going to take the story -- is it a mystery thriller, a suspense thriller? my thoughts are neither that but the next instalment is just screaming out of my head. now it's your fault. πŸ˜‚
February 2nd, 2021  
@summerfield LOL! I love it when an image spurs the imagination into a gallop! I just think of mystery and drama when I see images like this. Maybe I've read too much Stephen King and Dean Koontz, along with screenplays by Ray Bradbury and Rod Serling. Ha ha! Feel free to take it in any way you like. I love what you did with it earlier.
February 2nd, 2021  
@marlboromaam - you won't believe it, mags, but i already have 2,000 words written after this. i might take it to a novella. it's your fault! πŸ˜‚
February 5th, 2021  
@summerfield Okay. I'll take the blame. I have big shoulders. =) I'll be interested in reading what you've written.
February 5th, 2021  
@marlboromaam - i will probably post it one of these days. back about 4 or 5 years ago, i did a story in four instalments (sundays) called dragons and i had different kinds of dragon photos to accompany it. thanks, mags!
February 5th, 2021  
@summerfield You're welcome and thank you!
February 5th, 2021  
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