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8th March 2011
Which one works? by misschuff

Which one works?

photo 291
All SOOC as a first run with Cornus/os (which is the correct spelling?)

A sunset cause I could
#1 off to the side with sun outlining body (f/1.8)
#2 landscape from below facing set sun - is the headland a distraction? (f/2.8)
#3 similar angle away from headland - back to set sun - too dark?(f/1.8)
#4 portrait similar angle facing set sun bit of headland but trying to capture sand falling and blowing - perhaps hand held higher to show less pubic area? (f/2.8)
Comments
I really like #3
posted March 9th, 2011  
I don't think it's too dark, I really like the colours in it but I love the DOF
posted March 9th, 2011  
Wow, #1 and #3 are really great. Are you going to composite them over the sunset? This is really great to see how you are approaching it.
posted March 9th, 2011  
Prefer #3 with the focus on the sand.
posted March 9th, 2011  
@crappysailor baa ha ha ... I have NO IDEA how to do layers and masks ... all my work is insitu and with the elements and no artificial light ... all bar the Feb 12 studio shoot.

trying to capture the mythologies with the correct elements and time of day and position with a prop if necessary ...

THANKS! appreciate guy/male CC
posted March 9th, 2011  
@crappysailor and body type and mythology and then what is 'exposed' to the lens. This is my first facial recognition of the mythologies .. I think he suits it?
posted March 9th, 2011  
@jo365 @denisedaly that's at f/1.8 ... I was thinking it was way too shallow ... thanks!
posted March 9th, 2011  
I like #3 - don't think it is too dark at all, really like the lighting. Probably prefer shots with the headland.
Doing great work!!
posted March 9th, 2011  
I think its a great choice. Really fits what my mental picture of him.
posted March 9th, 2011  
@canberrabec thanks cute 'profile pic' ... you should get that on canvas ... it's so special.
posted March 9th, 2011  
@misschuff Thank you :) You are so sweet!
posted March 9th, 2011  
Very nice series! Great experiment!
posted March 9th, 2011  
#3's comp but facing sun would be perfect IMO
posted March 9th, 2011  
3 and 4. I love beach photos!!
posted March 9th, 2011  
I think #1 is my fav. you should post it in the next installment by itself...it's a great shot! they all are.
posted March 9th, 2011  
Definitely #3 - you see enough of his body but the focus on the sand is great!
posted March 9th, 2011  
I like #3 :)
posted March 9th, 2011  
I also like 3 - I like the focus and I don't think its too dark at all.
posted March 9th, 2011  
well, let me be the oddball. I love 1 and 2. :)
posted March 9th, 2011  
3!!!!!!
posted March 9th, 2011  
I think a combination of #1, sun hitting falling sand and #3 for the arm position. Head held a little higher. Not sure about the facial expression.
posted March 9th, 2011  
Number 3 is my favourite.
posted March 9th, 2011  
Number 3 is definitely my favorite! I love the strength of your subject's hand in this one.
posted March 9th, 2011  
I agree with everyone else, 3 is amazing! my second choice is 1 though just because i like silhouettes ;)
posted March 9th, 2011  
#3 for sure. good DOF
posted March 10th, 2011  
I am thinking I would go for #3 as well then #2.
posted March 10th, 2011  
#3. I like the focus on the sand with the perception of motion. Composition is my fav. All were great.
posted March 10th, 2011  
@jo365 @crappysailor @denisedaly @canberrabec @marinda @ellesnaps @jannaellen @anew30 @stepheesue @jupton8 @byrdlip @kjarn @lyndsyd @raelea @rosietea @digitalrn @jconner

3 has it ... funny as it was one of the earlier shots and it looked shite on the camera ... way too shallow but will continue with that format ... when the sun shines again. Next trying to match up low tide mid morning or afternoon with sun for a combo of him and the sundial ... maybe not till sunday at the VERY earliest. This series is probably going to take 12 months to complete properly.

THANKS ALL! CC most welcome and grateful for.

As to his expression ... this is pretty well the 'norm' other suggestions?
posted March 10th, 2011  
@crappysailor @wellbride @isisweiss I agree with you 1 was so majical ... having caught the sun in the sand ... will try that again when we meet up for another shoot ...
posted March 10th, 2011  
No 3!!! Definitely for me!
posted March 10th, 2011  
@ddantic cheers ... now to get him back ...
posted March 11th, 2011  
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