sitting on the rock of the bay

Here is the photo that I had a redo.
The setting was the same and I had a pretty model (the other model's sister) but this time I wanted it to look a little more natural and less processed. When I originally did the photos I liked them but then one day someone pointed out my over processing.

http://365project.org/myhrhelper/365/2013-06-15
http://365project.org/myhrhelper/365/2013-06-13

Here is my get pushed challenge from Joan Robillrd - @joansmor So my challenge is to redo a photo you think you can do better. You can reference the original in you comments or not that is up to you.

[Kathy Burzynski]

@joansmor another overflow of last week's challenge

[bkb in the city]

Kathy they are great portraits but I really do like this one

[Kathy Burzynski]

@bkbinthecity thank you!

[katy]

I think you have definitely improved upon yourself! And this one is more about the model and less about the scenery!

[Harry J Benson]

this is much better than the other two

[jackie edwards]

Very nice. Much improved over the others although they weren't horrible! You can see how much you care about the details and your self improvement in your craft