Woodland Walk by sarahlth

Woodland Walk

This is an old that I have been working on. I thought I might enter it into a competition at my local camera club but just wanted to get peoples feedback. Looks best seen on black if you have time
Lovely light, pov...This shot really pops on black.
October 1st, 2017  
Really lovely image, good luck!
October 1st, 2017  
Wow, that does look good on black. I like the tones, the light/shadow, the concept, etc. If I were to be super-picky (as you are possibly entering this in a competition), and bearing in mind I am/we are looking at a compressed image on a communal website from a home PC (so, therefore, it will be different than the version that gets printed), for me there is a sense of indeterminate clarity. This might be intentional, in which case all well. If it is not, I am left wishing for one certain point in the image that is crackingly in focus - the obvious spot is the two people and (again, with all the caveats) to me they look slightly fuzzy.
October 1st, 2017  
I love the natural framing as well as the light and shadows.
October 1st, 2017  
Like the framing, like the soft light. Perhaps could be a little sharper, depends how picky your camera club people are! I think I might take just a little off the bottom. Nice shot though and does look good on black
October 1st, 2017  
Beautiful framing
October 1st, 2017  
agree with photobird, if you remove the lighter parts in the foreground from the bottom it will better frame the subjects.
October 1st, 2017  
Great lighting and framing. Maybe a little brighten the path?
October 1st, 2017  
It looks fabulous on black. Gorgeous golden glow.
October 1st, 2017  
Awesome. A real stand out on black. Fav.
October 2nd, 2017  
Stunning! The colors are quite incredible. Fav.
October 2nd, 2017  
Fabulous image! Incredible viewed on black! Fav! :-)
October 2nd, 2017  
Wonderful!
October 2nd, 2017  
Beautiful on black. Being a bit picky I might just lighten the adult top to match up a little with the child's? Or soften the child's not sure which would be better.
October 2nd, 2017  
@peadar @photobird @mandygravil Thanks Peter, Mandy and photobird for your constructive criticism. I wish there was more likie that on this site. I was aware that due to the poor light some areas were not very clear and poor quality I think Peter and photobird have really confirmed what I thought. I see what you mean Mandy I had not noticed that. I will look at that if I do decided to enter it in competition
October 3rd, 2017  
@seattlite @fbailey @callapix @haskar @onewing @littleconnie @taffy @gaylewood @stimuloog Thanks for your great comments. Very helpful.
October 3rd, 2017  
great composition and light
October 3rd, 2017  
Thanks Sarah for your comments too, I know what you mean but I think sometimes people don't want to offend but its all a learning curve and I always appreciate any suggestions. Onto the next .... :-)
October 3rd, 2017  
This is so cool. The lighting and the moment of the two walking through these dense forest is amazing.
October 3rd, 2017  
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