The overwhelming consensus was definitely to remove the water drop which added nothing to the context. Also changed the crop a bit to give it more room below and on the right, and showed more of the wing at the top, hopefully emphasizing the curve of it. Better? Do you see anything else now that it’s been reworked? I’m tempted to remove the fish in the reflection. It can be seen in the crook of his bottom wing, but it’s cropped out of the top of the photo. It’s making me question what it actually is ..
Thank you for all your suggestions! Such a great community!!!
We are get-pushed partners for this week. I've followed you for awhile now, and remember that your grandchildren are twins. This weekend is National Twin Day. Your challenge is to take an image for National Twin Day. I leave the composition and details up to you, but I hope you can create a composition that celebrates your twin grandchildren. If you'd prefer a different challenge just let me know and I'll set another.
July 29th, 2019
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