Lovely shot! I agree with the comments about the text and understand your feelings about it. Is it possible to make the text less opaque? I think it's the size and strength of the text that gets in the way of a beautiful image.
Thanks for the nice comments about the photo, and the suggestions about the text. The text is not part of the image; I use it because photos can be easily picked off this site. Apparently since people are complimenting the image, people can look past the text.
Its a beautiful image. Text or no text.