Fav, really like this version. The earlier one was really cool with the classic pose, but this one feels more "down to earth" with the messy hair etc., and there could be a story in this one ... I think this shot would turn pretty intense, if she'd just turn her eyes towards the lens a bit for connection. I think that look would make Romeo climb balconies... :)
@janim Thanks:) You want more intensity, sure I could try to give you more intensity the next time
but she's only 17 years old so I don't know how much I can pull out of her....I agree about the look thou, a bit of contact would have made all the difference....yes there could be a story there, in the eyes. I have to see if she'll agree to do some more modelling, considering the fact that I've "killed"her bf and made him "cheat" on her, I wouldn't be surprised she 'd have had enough :D
@susale Hahaha yeah don't push her too far :) The eye contact - just like in real life - will add intensity, no need to do anything else in this shot. And by intensity I just mean "strong connection between the model and the viewer". Then you could think about the different kind of eye contacts... straight on stare, under the brows, just a glance from the corner of the eye, via mirrors... etc., and what kind of mood you can create out of those, as a photographer. Vähän läksyjä että palaat ruotuun ;)
but she's only 17 years old so I don't know how much I can pull out of her....I agree about the look thou, a bit of contact would have made all the difference....yes there could be a story there, in the eyes. I have to see if she'll agree to do some more modelling, considering the fact that I've "killed"her bf and made him "cheat" on her, I wouldn't be surprised she 'd have had enough :D