Form and shape... by vignouse

Form and shape...

Until today, I've managed to plan my shot, shoot it and upload on the day without problems. Today I had decided to shoot a bronze sculptured head to illustrate form and shape as described in Michael Freeman's book for the B&W Bookclub. But today we had 25 guests, so I spent the morning cooking, the afternoon entertaining and the evening dining. Happily, I found a half-hour free at the end of the afternoon to take some photos and confirm that they met the brief. At almost midnight when I got back to the computer, it was clear that they did not meet the brief. Several re-shoots and 2 hours later, I think I have something approaching that which was in my mind 3/4 of a day ago! Whatever, it's this or nothing now.... sigh!
Don't beat yourself up! Your guests come first, after all, and you set yourself quite a challenge here. You've got excellent separation of your subject and background, lovely details, and a real sense of depth and volume. The only reason I can see for you to say "something approaching that which was in my mind" is a few strong highlights on the right side of her face, and bronze is hard to shoot - dark as it seems to the human eye, it's still reflective! This is a lovely piece, and I think you've done it justice.
February 12th, 2014  
Well thank you Ma'am - those highlights really bugged me, but when I lost them, the photo went flat, and especially the eyes... they were really difficult to get right. i had set my heart on trying to stay within the exact letter of the rules for this site... but when I had to choose between posting a below par photo on time, or something better a bit later, quality gained the day over quantity.
February 12th, 2014  
Stop beating yourself up. It's not productive. Life is more important than a picture a day. And since you've taken on this month's extra learning project, it's not like you can just submit an i-phone snap like I did today.
February 12th, 2014  
Very nice form and light. Your project, your rules. But it is better to make it through. Sometimes when people get too strict on themselves they crash and burn.
February 12th, 2014  
Nicely done. I agree with others, don't beat yourself up. Where I live we still have 4 hours of February 11th so you are good. I think it's great you are challenging yourself. I'm playing it safe and haven't participated in challenges. Hopefully I can when spring arrives.
February 12th, 2014  
This reminds me of a character from an old English novel. I applaud your sticking to it and getting a picture that is pleasing. I hope you had a wonderful day with your guests.
February 12th, 2014  
@johenn @tigerdreamer @moxy @joansmor Thank you ladies for your kind comments. When I posted this in the early hours of this morning, it was at the end of an enjoyable but tiring day so my apologies for being a bit 'precious'. Hopefully we're back to normal service today!
February 12th, 2014  
I love the light and shade in this shot, and I admire your commitment to getting the exact shot you wanted!

Ian
February 12th, 2014  
Commitment was the word I was going to use, too - very impressed! And it was worth it - fab shot. Hope you had fun with your guests!
February 13th, 2014  
great lighting here! beautifully captured!
February 13th, 2014  
Lou
It's not fair to expect excellence three hundred and sixty-five consecutive times: you'll burn out. That is, unless you shoot the same look, same style, same process again and again. And that's not what the project's about!
As for me, I think the highlights make it. There is only the teensiest little blowout I see, on the back of her scarf (and I really had to scrutinize - it doesn't nothing to detract), and there is rich detail in the shadows. All in all I find myself thinking: what a charming little bust! She's got such worried eyes but a sweet smile - I wonder what she's thinking.
February 13th, 2014  
You cook? I'm impressed! :D hehe
February 13th, 2014  
@kiwiniknak Renaissance man, me!
February 13th, 2014  
@louuncouth Thank you Lou for the sound advice - I was being a bit 'precious' at the end of a long, tiring day... I'll try not to let it happen again ;-))
February 13th, 2014  
this is great - and yes, there are days when I get the pictures out of the camera and start processing madly to get something out of a bad job.
February 13th, 2014  
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