I was wondering whether to take out the cigarette and dirt, but decided not to. It adds something... texture or depth. Or maybe just a wee bit of reality ;-)
Very cool shot! I think you could have gone either way with the cigarette and dirt. This version says something different than the 'cleaned up' version would have said. I really like it.
Lovely composition and texture. Interesting choice on leaving the butt in, feels like it changes it from a straight art shot into a statement - I find it a little distracting for the image in its own right, but it says something about society, I think.