Joe take 2 by adi314

Joe take 2

I don't know if the left lamp post is distracting or framing.
And I'm not sure about leaving my subject centered.
@jgpittenger hi Jane, what do you think about this one.
September 5th, 2021  
@helenhall hi Helen, I didn't follow the rule of thirds in this one.
September 5th, 2021  
I think it works. The eye falls on the violin first, and then follows up to his angelic face. I like you you can see the depth now, with the road going round to the bridge in the background.
September 5th, 2021  
I think the two lamp posts add nice frame for him. I really like this one. One other suggestion since it’s such a great portrait…maybe raise the shadows a bit to his face especially his left, our right, eye
September 6th, 2021  
I think for a portrait being centered is fine
September 6th, 2021  
@helenhall Thank you so much Helen for your comments.
@jgpittenger Thank you so much
September 6th, 2021  
Yessss. Kind of has a throwback feel to it.
October 12th, 2021  
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