HELP by cdonohoue

HELP

I am intentionally loading this shot because I don't know what I am doing wrong. I am stuck on shapes this week because of the July challenge. So I shot the colored toothpicks in their holder thinking of using it as a circular shot. It really blurred towards the middle so I changed settings. And changed again. I had the macro lens and changed that. I am still getting a blur in here that I don't understand. I wiped the lens covers off and took shots of other things to see if the blur was in the camera and it isn't. I am missing something here and am stumped.
Not sure, but I like it!
July 25th, 2012  
Gosh Cathy... I don't know. My camera is so much more basic than yours I don't know any of the settings, but it seems to me that it doesn't know what to focus on. If I was doing this I think I'd give it less acute depth to try to focus on, lean back quite a bit more and see if that might help, then crop it to get the shape/size I want. Is the holder very narrow? I wonder if a wider container would give the same 'sunray' effect but with a slightly flatter surface to deal with?
Really sorry - spot the amateur :}
July 25th, 2012  
@positivemoments Thanks Tracy.
@filsie65 I think that is it Phil - I was trying to fill the frame and probably didn't give it a focal point. But that camera can get into a flower with no problem. That is why I am confused.
July 25th, 2012  
I think you might need more depth of field - a wider angel lens - under 50 MM and an aperture setting to a higher number - as high as you can go and still have enough light to take the picture. Possibly not having the center so deep might help with the problem also. I love the colors and the idea - it is a great picture just as it is.
July 25th, 2012  
@cdonohoue Hm - yes it does flowers beautifully. I wonder if all the ridges on the sticks are what's setting the focus awry... flowers can be much smoother and more uniform? Love the effect of the shot - if you can't get the shot crisper how about giving it a soft focus in picmonkey?! (guess thats Mohammed v Mountain thinking!) Don't give up, it's a great idea and looks super already :)
July 25th, 2012  
Try a numerically higher aperture and manual focus, make sure your focus points are set the way you want them to be. I like what you are trying to do here.
July 25th, 2012  
I thought is was coloured spaghetti at first! Like the effect even though yu are not 100% happy with it.....Am too much of a novice to offer constructive help, but have enjoyed reading the above comments... all good for learning!
July 25th, 2012  
All these comments are so appreciated for me! I have had that problem and also found to focus on something else at the same distance, hold that focus and move the camera to the right scene. Lot of work went into positioning these picks!
July 25th, 2012  
Get the focus point right despite not filling the frame, because you can crop or border your edges later. The shadow across the bottom was the only other thing that I thought might be a distraction. Personally I think you have done a great job on a very difficult subject - Well done :)
July 25th, 2012  
I think you definitely need to use manual focus on something like this. Cool idea though and should look good with your other circles xx
July 25th, 2012  
Oh no this reminds me of the muddled flags too much !!!!!
July 25th, 2012  
This looks a tricky subject. I suspect it is a DoF thing. For something like this, I'd use manual focus on Live View (zoomed in to x10) to set the focus and then take a series of shots at progressively higher f-stops. I decide which I like best when I review them on a bigger screen. It's a great idea for a photograph.
July 25th, 2012  
Still is an effective image, as above you need a wide aperture, enjoy experimenting!!
July 25th, 2012  
I still like it, it shows character to me. You only have that one spot that looks a little blurred. I'm sure not an expert, I would try to shoot it without at an angle, if nothing else works. I sure like what you thought of though, very smart.
July 25th, 2012  
I do like this ALOT, Cathy ..I'm no "pro" at advice. But I do like this look with the lovely colors and the blurred edges. I'd be pleased with it!! Try it different ways if you like. :)
July 25th, 2012  
Would love to see this when you've sorted out your problems (which I can't help with as I only use a point and shoot). Good luck with it; looks like a great idea.
July 26th, 2012  
It's a DOF thing, Cathy. The center of the spiral is farther away from the lens that the edges are.Try a smaller aperture.
July 26th, 2012  
It's a cool capture anyhow! Not sure what to tell you. Just keep after it! I'm very sure you'll get it!
July 26th, 2012  
Higher F stop, 8 or 9. Shoot form directly above and try manual focus as you can choose exactly where you want the shot to be in focus. Great subject and idea!
July 26th, 2012  
Crumbs, all that information.....sounds horribly complicated to me!! and I am about to embark on using a DSRL, help!! Brilliant idea and yes Pat it does remind me of your flags!!
July 26th, 2012  
Beautiful arrangement of colours. Love the shot.
July 26th, 2012  
Great!
July 26th, 2012  
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