I agree with Danette @danette - I was more inclined to favour the original when I saw the two images together but viewed on its own, I'd say you did a good job.
@vignouse Thanks! I like seeing the before and after effects, but it's only once I see the photo alone I can really sense the improvement. It was a "meh" shot originally and I was trying to add some narrative element to it. It was easy to use the Nik color collection.