The Hidden Stairs (continued) by digitalrn

The Hidden Stairs (continued)

"I know what she has been thinking for the past 65 years. You see, Momma is still alive." Your Mother is still alive, I repeated. "Yes, Momma has struggled with my dying, and even after all these years, she still blames herself for my death. The depression was so severe that she finally gave in, and for the past 20 years, she has been living in a mental institution. She is now 93 years old. Her spirit has found no rest. Our spirits have been trapped in this constant state of guilt all these years, and until I can find a way to release Momma from her guilt, I will remain trapped here behind these walls where I died." I still don't understand how I can help, and why me? Why am I the one who heard you? "You have the gift. It's a special gift that allows you to hear and communicate with ghosts or spirits. I have been searching all these years for someone, and now I found you. You are the one that will be able to help free our spirits. You are the one that responded to our cries." I can hear ghosts and even talk to them? Come on, that is totally ridiculous, I mean come on...What am I saying? Here I am, standing, talking to a ghost. Of course I can talk to ghosts. Why would I have this gift? "You were born with the gift. Will you help us? Please, Momma doesn't have much time. I must free Momma from her guilt." Well, I guess I don't have much of a choice, I guess I can try, but I'm still not sure what I can possibly do. "Momma and I had this special thing we did whenever one of us were upset with the other. We both had a special cross necklace, and then after an argument, after we felt better and had allowed our feelings to mend, we would exchange our cross necklaces. It was a symbolic ritual that meant we were willing to free ourselves of all guilt or hard feelings. We then wore it around our neck until we needed it again. The important thing was that when we exchanged the necklaces, it meant we were free to move on. We were ok, and it reinforced our love for each other. It was a symbolic way for us to move on from the past. I know if you give Momma the necklace she will immediately understand. The necklace and what it has always meant to us will free Momma from all the guilt that has been keeping her trapped all these years. She will be free to move on, and if she understands, I too will be free to move on from this place." Well, it does sound really strange, but I will do it, at least try. "I have held on to my necklace all these years in hopes of finding someone to help me. The necklace is in that little trinket box in the corner, over there." She pointed to the box, and I saw it...
Nicely shot, Rick.
October 31st, 2010  
Nice shot and interesting story
October 31st, 2010  
Nice photo. I hope you have the gift!!
October 31st, 2010  
Nice work. The shot and the story really draw you in...
October 31st, 2010  
Lovely pic, light
October 31st, 2010  
Nice picture and can not wait for the for the conclusion of the story.
October 31st, 2010  
nice entry, rick.... am scared to find out the rest....
October 31st, 2010  
scary....great picture!
October 31st, 2010  
Rick, I really am enjoying this story. How talented you are. Do you do any professional writing? If not you should. Your shot is great too. I love the mood.
October 31st, 2010  
Love the image you used to illustrate today's chapter.
October 31st, 2010  
can't wait ...
October 31st, 2010  
Lovely little box, and great story so far...
October 31st, 2010  
I just caught up with the last 3 days of the story, and I can't wait to see what happens next! You've put together a great series of shots to go along with it!
October 31st, 2010  
Nice. You should be a writer. Are you?
October 31st, 2010  
Great shot..and interesting story!
October 31st, 2010  
im loving the photo and the story rick , very interesting.... and scary .....
October 31st, 2010  
Wonderful photo,really enjoying this story!
October 31st, 2010  
Great shot Rick - loving the story.
October 31st, 2010  
Very creepy...that trinket box holds the answer.
October 31st, 2010  
You have tied all the pictures together. you've kept us all reading and waiting for each installment.
October 31st, 2010  
The necklace, take it to Momma. I can't wait to hear what Momma says.
October 31st, 2010  
Love the picture Rick, it kind of glows ~ in a ghostly way ~ I am looking forward to the final installment of your intriguing story.

Yes, you did read that I am now motivated to write more - I was an English language teacher before I came here to the US & wrote often then. I enjoy the opportunity this project offers me & you ;)
October 31st, 2010  
I'm so enjoying this story, great shot too!
October 31st, 2010  
Hmmmm.....very nice cliff-hanger. Are you going to compile this and try and publish?
October 31st, 2010  
Sue
still loving it! waiting to see what happens...
October 31st, 2010  
The final installment tonight. It may be a bit long, but I wanted to finish it on Halloween night.
October 31st, 2010  
Cannot wait for the finale!
October 31st, 2010  
Your keeping us all in suspense Rick !!looking forward to reading the last chapter .
October 31st, 2010  
...and that sure is a beautiful trinket box...
October 31st, 2010  
The trinket box actually belonged to my Grandmother.
October 31st, 2010  
OOOOHHHH.... the suspense you built up was/is really great! Incredible series.
October 31st, 2010  
What a neat ending to a great series Rick....you took a completely cool turn on the theme for the week and turned it into a bestseller I swear!!
November 1st, 2010  
Can't wait. You should be a writer...this is good!!
November 1st, 2010  
This is so mucch fun!!
November 1st, 2010  
Loving it! Your writing is awesome! Keeping me glued to the page to see what happens next.
November 1st, 2010  
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