Be Still by fiveplustwo

Be Still

I try to stay quiet, but I’m terrified
Perhaps they won’t check the closet
I might be safe in the end

I’ve already given too much
I know they’re my kids after all
But those are my cookies

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@kerosene
hahahahahaha
love it
February 22nd, 2017  
This is so very cool, and the little poem is BRILLIANT! Can I fav twice?
February 22nd, 2017  
@kerosene forgot to tag you...
February 22nd, 2017  
amazeballs, !! the light, the expression, on black.. wonderful
February 22nd, 2017  
Great minimalism... less is more!
February 22nd, 2017  
Haha, fantastic :)
February 22nd, 2017  
Has anybody ever gotten away with hiding in a closet......... They are always found in the end. Eat quickly time is of the essence. :)
February 22nd, 2017  
Oh.... I almost forgot to mention..... a beautifully executed shot. :)
February 22nd, 2017  
Very cool, I like it!
February 22nd, 2017  
This made my day. I was so intrigued by the shot....the seriousness, the dramatic black & white contrast, almost terrified look in her eye -- but then I read the comments and I laughed. Very creative! Absolutely a fav.
February 22nd, 2017  
Cool, suspenseful and creepy! Nicely captured and edited! Love the closing text too.....
@kerosene
February 23rd, 2017  
Splendid. VML the text.
February 23rd, 2017  
my post would've been something like this but had to change course at the last minute. but this is faaaaar better than what I had so just as well. superb, kiddo. aces!
February 23rd, 2017  
Great image and love the poem too
February 24th, 2017  
@annied I'm glad you like it Ms. Annie! ;)
@domenicododaro I am humbled Domenico, thank you so kindly!
@kali66 thank you dear Kali, I chuckled at your 'amazeballs' ;)
@vignouse thank you Richard, in my case particularly, the less you see of me, the more appealing ;) :)
@m2016 pleased you like it Mel!
@swillinbillyflynn haha thank you Mr. Billy Flynn! I'm afraid these days I try to make myself eat less quickly (I much need that)!
@adrienneb thank you very much!
@cindymc well, your comment made MY day! Thank you Cindy, very much appreciated :)
@mikegifford thank you dear Mike, pleased you like it!
@s4sayer thanks very much Margo :)
@summerfield I'm quite sure the 'faaaaar better' is very much exaggerated :) but thank you Vikki!
@jo38 thank you Jo :)
February 24th, 2017  
This is super, fun shot
February 24th, 2017  
@wenbow thank you dear Wendy!
February 25th, 2017  
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