not swimming, but crabbing  by quietpurplehaze

not swimming, but crabbing

We went out for breakfast yesterday and I took quite a few shots in the bright morning sunshine, welcome after some rainy, grey days. This little tableau caught my eye.

My title suddenly reminded me of this poem:

NOT WAVING BUT DROWNING
"Nobody heard him, the dead man,
But still he lay moaning:
I was much further out than you thought
And not waving but drowning.

Poor chap, he always loved larking
And now he’s dead
It must have been too cold for him his heart gave way,
They said.

Oh, no no no, it was too cold always
(Still the dead one lay moaning)
I was much too far out all my life
And not waving but drowning."
ack: Stevie Smith

I did not know until I searched for the poem online that Stevie Smith was a woman: Florence Margaret 'Stevie' Smith. I was going to write that her poem, seemingly like a nursery rhyme, has philosophical undertones and then I read in her biography that she had a 'volatile attachment' to the Church of England and that death, her "gentle friend," was perhaps her most popular subject. She was inspired by theology and also the fairy tales of the Brothers Grimm.


Nice scene but the poem is morbid.
August 16th, 2015  
Lovely capture my children loved crabbing when they were young. Great poem with its double meaning I can relate to it with my life at the moment.
August 16th, 2015  
Lovely shot Hazel!
August 16th, 2015  
Sam
Mmm, I thought he was unwell for a moment, lying down like that!
August 16th, 2015  
Love the picture great composition. The poem I knew but not the details about the poet. Thank you for that!
August 16th, 2015  
Lovely composition.
August 16th, 2015  
Bep
Lovely picture. I only knew the title of the poem; glad I have all the words now.
August 16th, 2015  
Love it, memories of childhood.
August 16th, 2015  
great candid!
August 16th, 2015  
Wonderful memory.
August 16th, 2015  
All my kids and their friends ( there were 8 of them in total ) grew up crab catching on their shared holidays in Swanage. As adults with their own children they return there together every year and do this with them. I love to see this
August 16th, 2015  
A lovely scene and a very interesting narrative.
August 16th, 2015  
This is a great candid shot. Love it. Interesting poem, too. I'm not familiar with it.
August 16th, 2015  
Great capture, light
August 16th, 2015  
Would it be a smaller fine if you drift or float by it. Neat capture.
August 16th, 2015  
A great candid shot. Interesting biographical background on Stevie Smith - didn't know any of this, though I had remembered she was a woman.
August 16th, 2015  
Neat image and powerful poem.
August 16th, 2015  
There is much to that poem.....I think the poor woman thought of death too much! I remember doing exactly this on Mallaig Pier, crabbing with one of those cross fishing lines you dangled down......brings back lovely memories,
August 16th, 2015  
Haha - love the classic crabbing pose. Interesting info about Stevie Smith as well.
August 16th, 2015  
A great and funny candid shot and I like the poem( I nearly love all poems as long as I can understand them)
August 16th, 2015  
happy days i think hazel
August 16th, 2015  
Nice capture. I'm waving, not drowning...LOL..:)
August 17th, 2015  
Pam
nice photo
August 17th, 2015  
That's such a fun shot- a tribute to the human spirit that always says, "Well, if I can't do that, then I'll do this!" Great candid!
August 17th, 2015  
Awesome picture.
August 17th, 2015  
Oh we used to take the boys crabbing,
August 17th, 2015  
@claireuk

Maybe Annabelle likes this?! Hope all is well with you, Claire.
August 17th, 2015  
@quietpurplehaze
She does love rock pools. Missing her this week she is on holiday with the parents.
August 17th, 2015  
Reminds me of crabbing in Cornwall as a child
August 17th, 2015  


I'm always happy when a photo of mine brings back happy memories.

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August 17th, 2015  
Beautiful Poem but also a nice photo :)
August 18th, 2015  
A wonderful poem and your shot is good as well
August 19th, 2015  
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