the thief by summerfield

the thief

the wrinkled skin, once soft and smooth
the dull, waning eyes, once sparkled with youth
the crooked smile, once vibrant with laughter
the now bent body, once an agile dancer.

you look in the mirror, wonder where you’ve gone
all these years but you’re left with the wisdom
that youth is fleeting, old age is full of grief
blame Time, the perfect, uncatchable thief.
- ©c.v. summerfield, 2010

(a reprise from my past sojourn with the mad hatters group)

processed in-camera.

Don't agree with old age being full of grief! I'm having a wonderful time - can almost get out of my chair! But I do think the same way as your good verse! Love the time piece! fav
February 3rd, 2017  
Well done, in every way. Fav
February 3rd, 2017  
Oh, don't remind me! LOL! Great shot. Very clever.
February 3rd, 2017  
Excellent high key!
February 3rd, 2017  
Lovely high key shot that speaks to me in so many ways. Well done and a FAV!
February 3rd, 2017  
Beautiful poetry in words and image. FAV. You have so much talent
February 3rd, 2017  
Yeah, but youth is so wasted on the young!!! Lovely photo, all that lovely whiteness!
February 3rd, 2017  
Wonderful picture. I don't agree that old age is full of grief, although it is sad to lose your friends and family at your older age. I am enjoying life as much as I can in my older age. We should travel and do great things when we are young and work when we are older.
February 3rd, 2017  
Fav for a fab photo and I like the rhymes in your verse but cannot agree with all the ideas. Well done!
February 3rd, 2017  
Love the clock & makes for a lovely high key :)
February 3rd, 2017  
Fabulous timepiece, great subject for black and white.
February 3rd, 2017  
Amy
Wowzers!
February 3rd, 2017  
Great high-key...something I will have to start working on very soon....the philosophical part, that I know......
February 3rd, 2017  
Old (older for me so far) age is not necessarily always full of grief although it has its moments, doesn't it? I guess I find there's always a balance and where I've lost some of the agility in my body, I've gained joy with five grandkids and a camera in my hand. Still, I understand and have felt the sentiment of the poem- well written my fiend! And an excellent capture to illustrate it.
February 4th, 2017  
Lovely image
February 4th, 2017  
fabulous image although the ribbon on the left keeps drawing my eye away from the watch. I do at times grieve for my youth but not sure if I had chance I'd want to relive it.
February 4th, 2017  
Fav.
February 5th, 2017  
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