Birds on a Wire, Re-Do by taffy

Birds on a Wire, Re-Do

Jane Pittenger @jgpittenger commented that she thought the original shot - https://365project.org/taffy/365/2022-02-07 - would look better without the fourth bird to the far left. The more I looked at the image, the more I thought her advice was right on target. In PS, I removed the left hand bird. Then I noticed the birds in the original image were a bit darker and muddier than made sense for a high key shot. This is the result of the cropping and re-editing. Thanks Jane for your advice!
@jgpittenger I think you were right. Well advised to crop out the fourth bird - feels more balanced this way. AND, once that bird was gone, I paid more attention to the b&w processing and think this is also an improvement. What do you think?
February 10th, 2022  
I prefer "three"!
February 10th, 2022  
Three is an odd number, so preferred. It shows the minimalism with 3. I like them both.
February 10th, 2022  
I like this one better.
February 10th, 2022  
I agree this looks better balanced overall. I did like the interaction between the two left hand birds in the first picture though.
February 10th, 2022  
This looks fabulous, Jane has a very good eye!
February 10th, 2022  
Great edit!
February 10th, 2022  
I saw noting wrong with the original shot however I much prefer this one, I like that it is brighter
February 10th, 2022  
@gardencat me too!
February 10th, 2022  
Wonderful! And it is better. :-)
February 10th, 2022  
Think I like this better
February 10th, 2022  
I agree with Jane this is so much better! What fabulous birds!!
February 10th, 2022  
Great capture
February 10th, 2022  
Ahh she was right!
February 10th, 2022  
This looks great and I see what you mean and I agree.
February 10th, 2022  
At first I thought one of the tightrope walkers had fallen off the wire. But then I calmed down when I read your text.
Anyway, odd numbers usually work better.
February 10th, 2022  
I prefer this one too.
February 10th, 2022  
I do like this edit better. The tighter focus and brighter processing draws more attention to the details, like their lovely toes.
February 10th, 2022  
Neat high-key image
February 10th, 2022  
A super high key capture
February 10th, 2022  
A good edit. Rule of odds and all that.
February 11th, 2022  
Feels right
February 11th, 2022  
Oh yes. I like it a lot
February 11th, 2022  
Like this new edid
February 11th, 2022  
Works very well.
February 11th, 2022  
❤️💕❤️
February 12th, 2022  
I especially like how you "whitened up" the background to show off the birds better.
February 12th, 2022  
Awesome
February 12th, 2022  
Excellent edit
February 13th, 2022  
I agree, this looks neat.
February 15th, 2022  
Leave a Comment
Sign up for a free account or Sign in to post a comment.