Retired from careers in journalism, teaching, and information technology. True passion is landscape and flower photography, gardens, walking, sunsets, good books, my iPad....
This is a good concept and you have almost cracked it! Unfortunately there are very strong halos around the silhouetted cables. This might have happened in an app on your iPhone or indeed in post production on your computer (Photoshop or similar). See if you can revisit the file and reduce it for a spectacular image. It caught my eye, and well done!
@marshwader Very good point and keen observation. I know exactly what you are talking about, and the issue is quickly resolved with a bit of fine tuning of the sharpness and focusing feature of my iPhone edit controls. However, I sort of like the halo effect on the wires. Perhaps it is the visible manifestation of the energy coursing through them?
