What's it flamin' missing?

February 2nd, 2012
Jo
Ode to Alf from Home and Away ;)

Took this shot today...



I think it's missing something... any help?
February 2nd, 2012
I agree, but am not quite sure. Instead of showing all the flame, have you thought of cropping into an area where you will get concentrated detail. I am trying flames this week, so I am interested in seeing what people say.
February 2nd, 2012
It is like having a runner going out of frame, there is no place for the flame to go. Try leaving the dark space above and shoft this either left or right of center.
February 2nd, 2012
i like the framing a lot - i wouldn't crop it. i think that you're missing some depth with the blown out portion where the fire is splitting. if I were to edit this, i would increase the clarity and contrast and maybe bring down the highlights a bit. :)
February 2nd, 2012
what's happening with Alf?
February 2nd, 2012
Jo
@brumbe @swguevin @sdpace

Thanks for the tips. I could only grab a few shots before my camera battery ran out, novice mistake I know!! So it was quite a close cropped shot.

@rich57

Alf from Home and Away always say flamin mongrels.
February 2nd, 2012
@joannebradbury As long as you are messing with fire, consider also turning the photo on its side and on its head.
February 2nd, 2012
Ah! Haven't watched it for over 20 years!
February 2nd, 2012
@sdpace thanks for the tip. Expect a flaming shot glass within the next few days.
February 3rd, 2012
@joannebradbury It's missing the marshmallows!

I think it needs a little extra space at the top for the flame to flame into, less so the space at the bottom, that feels wasted.
February 3rd, 2012
Hmmm, it's a great shot... for me I feel like it's isolated from the background, if that makes sense... like it's missing an ambient glow... but that could just be me... lol
February 3rd, 2012
Jo
@brumbe @swguevin @sdpace @rich57 @neda @pocketmouse

I had another go at the editing. Had to erase some of the flames at the top to add more height. Had lots of fun with tints ;)

February 3rd, 2012
The rainbow colors are fun, but just giving more room at the top significantly improved the photos for me! WTG!
February 3rd, 2012
I agree with @swguevin that it needed a bit more space. I also like the contrast a bit more.
February 5th, 2012
@joannebradbury hey look the goblet of fire! Done some fire rubber stamping myself on a few of my photos from last July, but I agree with @swguevin that the space is what fixes the photo....though that purple flame is pretty darn awesome too.
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