critique please?

[james Hayward]

Looking for any critique you can offer

[Jaqie Sakura]

I think its a great photo! I would lighten up his face a little more but other than that, I like it :D

[Emma]

I agree with Jaqie, a great photo which could be improved by lightening the face so the details are clearer.

[Laura]

Ditto above.

[Alecio]

I like the overall vintage look on it, @arrayofblues @emmar84 @jsbp I think the same

[Denise]

Great composition. I would also lighten up his face to brighten the shot.

[Lisa Pouncy]

I love the shot. I think the composition is great but it is a bit dark although that may be my laptop playing silly tricks :o)

[Dorrena Ortega]

Ok, I'm the odd person here because it's too abstract for me to have an opinion on the subject. I see a person but don't know what is being conveyed. The chain and the metal pole don't make any sense to me. I'm sure it's just me. ;-)

[james Hayward]

I was at a railway gala and this is a man who is helping fill up the train with water. my attempt at creating something different. I agree that the face could be a bit lighter and I will see what I can do with the software that I have got.