First Critique

October 21st, 2011


Shot I took at the beach in Destin, FL a few weeks ago. I had a 12x18 of it printed out and i like it. Might be my first shot hanging on the wall. I might go back and do a 16x24. Was wonder what could have been done better. Your not gonna hurt my feelings.

0.6s
f/9.0
ISO200
38mm (1.5 crop due to APS-C sensor)

October 21st, 2011
For me I feel like the feild of View is to narrow. I like the concept but I still think you need a wider angle and move a couple feet forward and to the left.
October 21st, 2011
I really like the scene you captured but think it might profit from a bit more light and contrast.
October 21st, 2011
I like it and also the slow shutter speed that gives a blurry effect to the water. I agree with @jannaellen, I would give it a bit more light and contrast, so that the white on the waves look really white. A wider angle would possibly be better, with less emphasis on the foreground rock
October 21st, 2011
I like this scene very much, I like to see the textures on the rock as well as the sea. I would try taking it very early in the morning to see if you get a little more light and colour on those rocks and in the sky.
October 21st, 2011
a bit of light, and a touch of contrast. I think I am missing some of the detail. Also I might adjust the color tone slightly warmer since it looks like the end of the day when the light usually has warm tones.
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