Flimsy like lace paper by lily

Flimsy like lace paper


Flimsy like a lace paper window pane
Rattled in a heavy wind blown rain
The rain
The rain came quickly down
And the shutters leaked as they tried in vain
To curb the pelting sound
The rain the rain falls wet and cold
And weakens the hillside ground
Which then gives way and
Tumults over the wall which cannot hold
The rain the rain
When will it end
The rain will never cease
The rain will someday wash our weary souls I am told
The rain the rain the rain the rain

©2007 J. K. Bradford
this is a nice composition, the colors are lovely and the idea is great, nice idea... fantastic photo
September 16th, 2010  
I love the different textures and how the colors work together. Your work is so original-- I love it.
September 16th, 2010  
Wow! love the look!
September 16th, 2010  
So delicate and beautiful.
September 16th, 2010  
Beautiful. I love the feelings you capture in your photographs!
September 16th, 2010  
Wow, this is such a lovely composition!
September 16th, 2010  
beautiful composition and poem :)
September 16th, 2010  
This is great...nice work.
September 16th, 2010  
Wonderful pic, the soft colors of the rainy day are really nice.
September 17th, 2010  
I love those muted colors. And it fit perfectly to our weather today, rain, rain and rain again.
September 17th, 2010  
Love the sense of seeing through gauze. Very dramatic.
September 17th, 2010  
beautiful, dramatic like Allison said!
September 17th, 2010  
So pretty!
September 17th, 2010  
Nice collage.
September 17th, 2010  
Love your works!
September 17th, 2010  
Beautiful collage and I really like the vintage feel!
September 17th, 2010  
It's like an impressionist painting. so lovely!
September 17th, 2010  
Laerke, another gorgeous shot! this is really beautiful!
September 17th, 2010  
your collages are absolutely gorgeous...
September 18th, 2010  
This is perfect!
September 19th, 2010  
Beautiful! The processing is amazing!
September 19th, 2010  
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