More Mannequins by mcsiegle

More Mannequins

Still experimenting with mannequins found in store windows, high contrast, and collage. I liked it last night (insanely late at night when I finished). Looking at it now as I prepare to upload, I'm not sure I'm satisfied. You may be seeing more refinements of this later. Inspired still by Ray Metzker's work, from the artist challenge a couple back.
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I suppose I'm a bit obsessed with this. I couldn't resist trying to tweak it almost immediately. I've posted it in my Alternates album:
http://365project.org/mcsiegle/alternates/2014-10-11
Looks good to me - the hard part is often getting a balanced outcome. I think you have achieved this.
October 11th, 2014  
@kali66 Kali and @janim Jani, I keep tagging you for these. Your feedback has been very helpful. I may go back into photoshop and tweak this some more. A few things I'm not fond of -- the gray bit in the third row, second column, I think I need to just clone that to pure black and white. And the third and fourth column on that row is feeling like too large an expanse of white. It was really late last night when I called it quits. Your opinion?
October 11th, 2014  
@stevet201 Steve, thanks so much for your feedback. I'm glad you feel it is well balanced. That's what I'm aiming for.
October 11th, 2014  
I think the grey bit works really well - adds an additional texture. I also like the positioning of the hands. One thought I had is whether to move the first column third square to the top as a contrasting balance to the bottom right hand corner?
October 11th, 2014  
I like this one, more concise really great high contrast! thanks for showing me . it is intersting how the shapes work through several squares, I am thinking there is a lot of scope to play with here
October 12th, 2014  
what a funky fun collage! love the bits and pieces, high contrast and the inversions... very cleverly conceived!
October 12th, 2014  
I like the textural strength of the grey against the purity of the b&w images
October 12th, 2014  
Hi! I am your Get Pushed partner this week. I can see that you are a fan of the artist challenges so for Get Pushed I would like you to pick your favourite artist who is not a photographer, and take a photograph inspired by their work.

Enjoy!
October 12th, 2014  
@anne_k Thank you, Anne. I think I've only done a few artist challenges, but Metzker really grabbed a hold of me, so it's a good challenge to decide what artist I'd like to interpret. I'll look through your album now and get you a challenge.
October 13th, 2014  
I love this whole concept. I agree on making that one gray bit pure black and white, and that image is better on your other attempt. The large white area does get a lot of attention, and if that was not your purpose, maybe you need to change it. I personally like that there is some starting point, where to look first and then work your way around the image. The thing I love the most in this image are the parts where the mini-images blend seamlessly into each other, and I would really focus on how to get that effect as much as possible... For example, move the top left corner image to the left so that the leg turns into arm in the picture below.... I think the other collage has a stronger bottom row, there's more blending of images. Would be cool to see that bottom row (+ the fixed "gray bit" image) in this collage. Finally, the image with the line pattern (bottom row #2) is very strong graphic element, love it among all the hands and legs. Looked really cool as inverted also!

A lot of text, hope it made sense. Fav.
October 13th, 2014  
This is really cool Mary, love the play of negative and positive play. Did you hear that Metzker died 10 days ago?
October 20th, 2014  
@irisn No, I hadn't! Thank you for telling me. In fact, I must admit I wasn't at all familiar with his work until the artist challenge.
October 20th, 2014  
excellent work! fav
October 24th, 2014  
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