Black is better. Working on lines and shadows in black and white - liked this for a subject but not sure if there's enough contrast at the end - or what to do about it. But I'm working on it! There actually was a small drop off at the end and then some rocks - water had been up to the bridge for a while.
@dianen Unfortunately, then I'm looking into the parking lot. But may go try and see. If I extended it from this view to have the dam in the background, then I lost the impact of the lines and the bridge. Hmm.
Wonderful pov and leading lines! I agree with Taffy . . . my eyes keep going down, down and then it's a mystery at the end of the line . . . open-ended! I think that's great! Fav!