tree stump on the right by northy

tree stump on the right

posting alternate shot of this morning's cityscape as a couple folks asked about a comp with the tree stump on the right...

i think if i went back and did this again i would go for a lower pov, and maybe try some focus stacking...

the shot i originally posted is here:
http://365project.org/northy/365/2013-12-15#comment-17035098
@summerfield @quixoticneophyte i can't get the light to come out as nice on this one, and i think a slightly lower pov would be better... not sure i am a huge fan of the sweep of snow on the left, and not sure that the angle would work if i tried to avoid it when i go back... thoughts?
December 15th, 2013  
I like this one a lot better - more reflections. Absolutely beautiful! fav
December 15th, 2013  
I like this composition better as well. I think you needed to focus further back into the scene to get the 'hyperfocal distance' and get the back buildings in focus too. But I love the colors and the wide feel!
December 15th, 2013  
Lovely shot!
December 15th, 2013  
@archaeofrog i NEVER manage to get that right, Katie... not sure if i'm doing it wrong, or just not getting the right focal point, but it seems if i don't focus on the foreground, the foreground ends up being blurry in ways that i don't like... will have a go with focus stacking next time around...
December 15th, 2013  
@northy They make elaborate tables about it. If I knew I was going out to take such a shot, is yet to get a guesstimate beforehand.
December 15th, 2013  
wonderful,... just wonderful! I would only lower the POV a little to avoid the stump touching the lights. Was your focus point on the front or middle of the stump?
December 15th, 2013  
Jo
Both are beautiful shots but I think I like this one better. Love the golden lights and the reflections.
December 15th, 2013  
Beautiful!
December 15th, 2013  
I like this one better.
December 16th, 2013  
Compositionally, this one is getting there! I'd take a few more steps to the left again. Tone wise the other one is bang on! The log on the right is definitely the go for me. That's a huge amount of white stuff on the left though. I do like the sweep of the bay. I'd play with more sky and less white stuff, taking various captures in height and angle, from really low to quite high, always trying to keep the log down low in the frame, unless you were able to get it absolutely isolated and well away from the lights. I'm always surprised by how just the most subtle change of POV at the wide end of a lens can change things so much in regard of final composition.

I know you'll knock this one out the park when you go back.
December 16th, 2013  
AC
I love the tones so much more on this version. I find the item on the right to be less distracting in this version. I love lights and reflections and they seem to be more prominent in this version. Well done!
December 16th, 2013  
@ltodd tx Lynn - I'm pretty sure focus was on the right towards the top if the stump...
December 16th, 2013  
Beautiful
December 16th, 2013  
Both are lovely but I prefer this one! I like the tones and composition better! Looks cold there!
December 16th, 2013  
I definitely prefer this version. The focus on the stump has a different feel and beauty of it's own though.
December 16th, 2013  
Interesting to watch the options and advice. I like the reflections in this one but think the foreground is dominating a bit more than I would prefer.
December 16th, 2013  
Stunning shot!
December 16th, 2013  
beautiful
December 16th, 2013  
Love it. I like the other one too but I think I like this one best.
December 16th, 2013  
Very beautiful!
December 16th, 2013  
It is a stunning shot but I prefer the original for the reason you give about the sweep of snow. Both are really great shots
December 16th, 2013  
wonderful shot, love the tones
December 16th, 2013  
I much prefer this one despite the empty expanse of snow, the reflections get a better chance here.
Maybe you could haul another log down to fill the space ;)
December 16th, 2013  
I like the other version a tad bit more - but this is beautiful too! :)
December 16th, 2013  
Wonderful cityscape.
December 26th, 2013  
Its beautiful
January 7th, 2014  
This is beautiful... fav
January 21st, 2014  
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