5am by sabresun

5am

Another day in this conscious tenderness,
all the leaves are swept up, so tidy.

The stems under the broom of us,
capable piles of reds and orange, the colours
of our love that still seems fresh green too.

In the air, the reverberation
of an event we spoke of last night, touching,
from the window all the day is dawning.

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Above is one of my poems. This shot sort of reminded me of it, so I thought I'd post it alongside. It was more like 5.30am when I took this. I just wanted to try to capture that particular blue seen as day dawns, and this was about as close as I could manage on this morning. I can't seem to get any decent night shots with my lumix.
Lovely shot and a beautiful poem.
August 31st, 2011  
Beautiful words Matt, and also a nice photo to sum up your words.
August 31st, 2011  
I think your poetry is perfect for this, and actually makes the composition that much stronger. You did capture great blue tones here.
September 1st, 2011  
B
As always your poetry moves me in unexpected ways.
September 1st, 2011  
Lovely poem, Matt! It's a beautiful pic, too!
September 1st, 2011  
really like your poem and the picture is lovely for it
September 4th, 2011  
I love how the poem shapes the photo and vice versa. They go hand in hand beautifully.
September 5th, 2011  
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