Decided to try similar shot before all the naartjies got eaten up, but now see if it is better to have a whole fruit. I couldn't fit in the peel as well as I didn't have space to move further back with my 100mm prime lens, so will have to find another location in my home to experiment some more with fruit.
@narayani Thanks Narayani. I work an idea because I am not naturally artistic enough to have confidence in what I'm doing ... so I try different ways of setting the same thing up. Perhaps with practice, one day I'll start learning to just see first time what is right and what is not quite right.