a bee on a daisy beside the dead lily
can't cheer up a very tired vikki
so they went to ribbet, a rip-off of picnik
and they got prettied up, very very quick.
but something happened on their way back
they got kidnapped, pushed into a sack
and the bee shouted "hey, who turned off the light?"
then they started to glow, all pretty and bright.
-o0o-
i write the lamest poem ever. it's because i'm not a poet. i'm a writer, damnit!
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@jannkc - well, glad to have made you smile. reading back the poem the syllabic metre was quite off so i did a little bit of adjustment. was going for what you did the other day but couldn't make it happen and i didn't want to stay too long on the computer - my eyes hurt too much. thank you, jann.
@jannkc - well, glad to have made you smile. reading back the poem the syllabic metre was quite off so i did a little bit of adjustment. was going for what you did the other day but couldn't make it happen and i didn't want to stay too long on the computer - my eyes hurt too much. thank you, jann.