get pushed #41 - negative space by summerfield

get pushed #41 - negative space

the ringling bros. and barnum and bailey circus!

i remember reading all the posters about the movie "the greatest show on earth" when i was still a young warthog back in the old country. one of the photos in the posters was an elephant standing on an orb.

my get pushed challenge this week comes from kali @kali66 and her push is " I have settled on compositional thinking for you, using negative space and the rule of thirds. so your subject definitely wont be smack dab in the middle and the space around it will be empty, or at least an interesting shape."

processed in camera to black and white so still sooc.
so @kali66 here's what i came up with. i have another idea so we'll see each other here tomorrow, i suppose.
April 29th, 2013  
lots of negative space here to be sure, so different to see a diminutive elephant! I wonder if you have thought about composing this with the rule of thirds, do you know what that is? if not there are many webpages that describe it, I have found my compositons are much stronger for being aware of it. . If the elephant was somewhere about the bottom left third junctions there would be a little more black space behind him and less at the top so that the spotlight would be filling the bottom third horizontally, I copied it and looked at it myself in photoshop, you could try some different crops with this in mind and see what you think.
April 29th, 2013  
ps looking forward to hearing what your push for me might be :)
April 29th, 2013  
i see you are trying to do your work sooc, once you have tried this out by cropping and it becomes second nature you will be able to think about it whilst taking the photo, my camera even has an overlay on the screen to show where the third lines cross.
April 29th, 2013  
Very creative. I have not been to a circus since I was a young child.
April 29th, 2013  
yes very creative! lonesome elephant lost in space. =)
April 29th, 2013  
great shot stirring memories
April 29th, 2013  
I like it, very cool lighting!
April 29th, 2013  
Nice negative space. Love the lighting on the elephant.
April 29th, 2013  
just enough light
April 30th, 2013  
Nice work. I think you met the challenge well. I like the lighting too.
April 30th, 2013  
awesome response to the challenge this week
April 30th, 2013  
Stunning composition and lighting. Great shot.
May 1st, 2013  
Great job with this! Love the composition and lighting!
May 1st, 2013  
Such a clever shot, fab u lous!
May 3rd, 2013  
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