Autumn River by tosee

Autumn River

It was an overcast sky, as I slipped and stumbled, the river cut it's way through the rock ledges on it's journey to the big lake.
\
rushing through the rocks
tumbling and cutting it's way-
to the sea it cries
(I know it goes to the lake first, but that is only a stop on it's journey to the sea)
Awesome perspective
October 2nd, 2023  
Lovely
October 2nd, 2023  
Terrific pov, leading line
October 2nd, 2023  
I like your POV and the rugged rocks and rushing water.
October 3rd, 2023  
Lovely narrative and image.
October 3rd, 2023  
Leave a Comment
Sign up for a free account or Sign in to post a comment.