lemony art

Pinterest inspired... yet is missing something, I tried multiple things... Suggestions?

[jackie edwards]

Wondering if your background was continued under the fruit...no table texture?

[Adi]

@jackies365 you are right, If the fruit does not dry too much I will give it a try

[Linda]

Looks cool!

[sarah]

your knife skills are awesome!! lol. nice

[Sharon Lee]

now that's orange art

[Rob Z]

For what it's worth I feel it's a little fussy - too many bits and pieces. I'd like to see it with the top slice and its support removed. Just a thought... I do like the general idea and shapes etc. :)

[Shanne]

fascinating creation

[Brigette]

@jackies365
what Jackie said

[Clare Gadsby]

interesting! i agree with @jackies365 and also @robz - except that i would remove the foreground pieces and just have the main tower - if it would stand up! which on a second look it may not ;) the crisp detail is lovely

[Joan Robillard]

Fab

[haskar]

I agree with @jackies365. Lovely shapes and colour.

[Adi]

Thanks everyone for your comments, I will give your suggestions a try :)

@jackies365 @haskar @joansmor @pistache @brigette @shannejw @robz @sugarmuser @samae @lindasees

[Helen Jane]

great ideas and some creative orange sculpture work going on here. I agree about the background - the table distracts a little from being able to see the clear shapes of the orange parts standing out. If you wanted to add something - maybe an orange leaf or cloves ie a little something related in a contrasting colour.

[Fr1da]

so creative ! I think its just perfect !