Letting go..... by amrita21

Letting go.....

Intense feelings
Poignant moments
All find room within.....

When its time to bid farewell....
They hesitate to say good-bye..

They increase the pain
Outlive their stay....

I am slowly stepping out...
Letting the tide rise within....
Its hitting rock n falling back....
I see it glide over sun-hit waters....
Take its time to hit the shore...

And slowly dissipate into nothingness.....

This is the image which I processed yesterday ( I see the sea)
This is so beautiful...I love it...trying to work some quality Mumbai time into my next trip purely on the basis of your shots.
May 23rd, 2013  
Lovely shot.
May 23rd, 2013  
Love the POV and the composition of this picture.
May 23rd, 2013  
very beautiful shot with great perspective and blue tones! great mood and as always beautiful poem!
May 23rd, 2013  
Gorgeous and love the poem.
May 23rd, 2013  
A beautiful image and lovely poem!
May 23rd, 2013  
A fav for me, Amrita. Love the view, the lone man and the poem. Wonderful al lthe way around.
May 23rd, 2013  
@thedysue @smithak thanks for the comment. :)
May 23rd, 2013  
@wind_of_the_sothern_sea @writingdays @taffy. Thanks Arefin,Rohini,Taffy for your wonderful words,much appreciated. :)
May 23rd, 2013  
@sansjuan Nita, that is so wonderful, thank you and for the fav too. :)
May 23rd, 2013  
@swilde Sue, thanks. Mumbai is a fun place. Do let me know when you come, will be great to see you. I do process the images, but the essence and flavour of Mumbai is what comes across :)
May 23rd, 2013  
Interesting experiment with colour; the text is another story....
May 23rd, 2013  
Really wonderful , Amrita. Love the poem and the emotion in the words.
May 23rd, 2013  
Great composition to go with wonderful words
May 23rd, 2013  
Great colours. It's like a postcard xx
May 23rd, 2013  
Really, really nice. So peaceful and cheerful at the same time!
May 24th, 2013  
@mara19500 Thanks Mara..... yes, it is :))
May 24th, 2013  
@veengupta thanks so much for your appreciative words Veena! Hope your having a great time! :) nice of you to keep up
@psychographer Thank you Lisa, for your lovely comment :)
@skpinny that is such a beautiful thing to say.... thank you. :)
May 24th, 2013  
Fabulous photo. I like your perspective amrita. That water is gorgeous, and I like how you captured the gent on the rocks. Nice!
May 24th, 2013  
@adamj Thanks for your wonderful words Adam, much appreciated. :)
May 24th, 2013  
Wow, quite different from yesterday's photo! Beautiful composition (especially the lonely man) and lovely colors. Nice words too!
May 24th, 2013  
beautifully composed
May 24th, 2013  
Really gorgeous!!
May 24th, 2013  
@lunaksi Thanks for your wonderful comment. :)
@abhijit Thanks Abhijit! :)
@amandal Thank you Amanda! :)
May 24th, 2013  
Beautiful!! Such a amazing view and love your pov/composition!
May 24th, 2013  
really like it! love the colors, pov and the man sitting there really adds to it. Good job!
May 25th, 2013  
Wonderful composition and lovely words :)
May 25th, 2013  
@jodimuli Thanks Joey :)
@sjouk Thanks so much Sjouk :)
@camim Thanks for stopping by Camila and for your appreciative words :)
May 25th, 2013  
Beautiful comp and scene!
May 25th, 2013  
@katerinatina Thanks Katerina! :)
May 25th, 2013  
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