A great idea executed poorly. I have come to the realization that my eyes are not cut out for detail work anymore. That being said I can still see a lot of flaws in this but have spent way too much time trying to perfect it and am ready to just be done with it!
Well, I think you did well for the circumstances! I am feeling that way about focusing these days- I think I have everything sharp and then I put it in the computer and I'm disappointed. Autofocus has become my new best friend. Good job!