The Remains by kevin365

The Remains

I make the changes needed
The kind words and stern warnings, all heeded
The new found freedom brings the happiness that it proclaims
And still, the shadow of the fence remains

I do the things I should
Consequences faced, the bad and the good
My vision seems clearer, we move along and no one complains
And yet, the shadow of the fence remains
libe...favor.
March 24th, 2014  
Love
March 24th, 2014  
Jae
Wow...pretty introspective there. Love the picture and the words. Thanks for sharing!
March 24th, 2014  
Brilliant image and words...fav
March 24th, 2014  
Wonderful compositions!
March 24th, 2014  
@amandal Thank you, Amanda
March 24th, 2014  
@lifepause Thanks, Jae. Yeah, a bit. I appreciate your comments
March 24th, 2014  
@sheilag Wow, thanks, Sheila. Very much
March 24th, 2014  
@juliedduncan Thanks, Julie. I appreciate your support
March 24th, 2014  
Dark and light, strong yet delicate. Wonderful.
March 25th, 2014  
Beautiful words, love the deep dark feeling this sets off ! Nicely done
March 25th, 2014  
Jae
@m9f9l well said!
March 25th, 2014  
Excellent narrative!
March 25th, 2014  
Love it!
March 25th, 2014  
Love this shadow capture it reminds me of lace.
March 25th, 2014  
like this a lot…..well done!
March 26th, 2014  
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