Up In Smoke by kevin365

Up In Smoke

The romance is over.
One of my closest
Through all turmoil,
Clings now.

The magic is gone.
We had so many friends,
Now we're alone
In the alley.

Once a light
In my life.
And now,
The ember burns untrue.

This is one sided.
I see that now.
I need you,
You don't need me at all
Jae
I had to read this twice....slowly. You can do it! The pic is cool too!
February 25th, 2015  
Great shot for the words! Take care!
February 25th, 2015  
Your image and words are equally beautiful.
February 25th, 2015  
deb
Beautiful words and great shot to go with them
February 25th, 2015  
@lifepause Thanks, Jae! Here's hopin :)
February 25th, 2015  
@nanderson Thanks for your kind words, Nancy!
February 25th, 2015  
@cejaanderson I appreciate that, Jane. Thank you
February 25th, 2015  
@deb60 Thanks, Deb! Tried a bit on this one :)
February 25th, 2015  
Another that speaks volumes. *sigh* Been here. Done this. Wonderfully successful for 5.5 yrs. Good luck!
February 25th, 2015  
deep words.....
February 25th, 2015  
Lovely words and lovely image......
February 25th, 2015  
I have chills over this...wow...really wow...
February 26th, 2015  
@blueberry1222 Thanks, Krista:)
February 27th, 2015  
@susie1205 Thank you, Susie, very much!
February 27th, 2015  
@linnypinny Wow, Lin! Thank you! Wish me luck:)
February 27th, 2015  
@voiceprintz Congratulations, JT! I will keep you in mind as inspiration! Thanks for your contributions! I really appreciate them!
February 27th, 2015  
Hey good luck!! Great photo and poem. Well done!
February 27th, 2015  
Image and words so dramatic,love it:)
February 27th, 2015  
What a poignant photo to accompany the words. We women always assume we're the most romantic and sentimental of a pairing, but it's almost painful to see a man carrying a torch...
February 27th, 2015  
@kt8ird I appreciate that, Kate! Gonna do it :)
March 3rd, 2015  
@joemuli Thank you, SIr!
March 3rd, 2015  
@Weezilou Oh, I do, Louise! Thanks!
March 3rd, 2015  
@kevin365 I'll be cheering you on!
March 3rd, 2015  
You can do it. I bet it would be easier if someone bet you money. That motivates me.
March 6th, 2015  
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