Miracles by kevin365

Miracles

The anticipation wanes
to an inside joke
Like winning the lottery
Or finding the lucky penny
Don't let it

When the moment arrives
You will be surprised
Even as the hope has lost its luster
And the dream put away

The climax of the wanting
Is worth the wait
Hold tight to the impossible
It will be realized
Jae
Finally! They magically appeared and jumped out of the water! Thanks for sharing in my whole excitement! Great words, really!
April 1st, 2015  
I love the excitement and enthusiasm within the gesture you photographed! Your words (again) fit so perfectly. The last stanza really strikes a chord; I find it very moving on many levels!
April 1st, 2015  
Sue
I love this, you can just feel the excitement in that little pointed finger! Wonderful words to go with it. Thanks for this.
April 1st, 2015  
Great composition, great words
April 1st, 2015  
@lifepause Thanks for sharing this with me, Jae!! Best surprise EVER!!
April 2nd, 2015  
@Weezilou Thank you, Louise! Wrote around the last stanza so I appreciate your input even more. Am very lucky to be there
April 2nd, 2015  
@sioux Exactly, Sue! Thanks!!
April 2nd, 2015  
@susie1205 I really appreciate your consistent input! Means worlds
April 2nd, 2015  
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