The water drops fall
across us, all.
They never cease.
Blurred lines of tumult and peace.
Flow onward, tomorrow toward
As you and I flow onward, move forward
They never cease
And care not for for the tumult. Or the peace.
The water drops fall.
And that's All.
1...Lovely meditative moment through a lens...
2...To my mind, a gentle Asian sensibility to the chosen words...a run-on Haiku...
3...which of course would be Haiku if it ran on...
4...and sometimes I have trouble staying on course when I start an idea... (ha!)
5...which leads me to say once again, your enigmatic pairing often has me wondering which came first...
6...good stuff Kevin!
@Weezilou
1) Your addition to this piece, as always, is greatly appreciated
B) It is a meditation as Haiku is a meditation, thank you for noticing :)
III) I hope that you are well and healing and you are generous in your compliments :)
June 13th, 2015
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2...To my mind, a gentle Asian sensibility to the chosen words...a run-on Haiku...
3...which of course would be Haiku if it ran on...
4...and sometimes I have trouble staying on course when I start an idea... (ha!)
5...which leads me to say once again, your enigmatic pairing often has me wondering which came first...
6...good stuff Kevin!
3..."wouldn't" (of course!!) Not much of a wordsmith over on this coast!
1) Your addition to this piece, as always, is greatly appreciated
B) It is a meditation as Haiku is a meditation, thank you for noticing :)
III) I hope that you are well and healing and you are generous in your compliments :)