A Moment in Time by kevin365

A Moment in Time

The moment is shy;
The breath of one
who wonders why.
Their place unsure
in the body of the conversation
or the cure

The pause is pregnant
with hesitation.
Beauty overlooked.
Waiting at the sill
with presence, and wonders
and still
Jae
Pretty picture, like a girl I know....perhaps?
February 21st, 2017  
Beautiful photo, Kevin! Not fully grasping the meaning of the words, but liking some of the pairings of the lines...
February 21st, 2017  
Great image and poem. Fav.
February 21st, 2017  
Really beautiful & atmospheric
February 21st, 2017  
Terrific comp!
February 23rd, 2017  
I find myself wondering if this bloom is inside trying to get out or outside trying to get in... your words suggest the latter. Thank you for making me pause and ponder on the plight of those always on the outside...
February 24th, 2017  
Pretty image. Lovely light and composition.
February 28th, 2017  
@lifepause indubitably :) Thanks!
March 2nd, 2017  
@Weezilou Thank you, Ma'am:) bit of little drummer boy, matchstick girl, work being unappreciated kinda thing
March 2nd, 2017  
@veengupta Thank you,Veena:)
March 2nd, 2017  
@susale Fun to make,Dude! Almost came out as intended. Thanks
March 2nd, 2017  
@ribbet9 Thanks, Candace:)
March 2nd, 2017  
@vignouse Your time and attention is so very appreciated! You are correct in the latter. This is actually a mirror with window design. The confusion is in the execution.
March 2nd, 2017  
@kwind Thank you,Ma'am!
March 2nd, 2017  
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