Coastal Mountains by kwind

Coastal Mountains

I forgot to upload this yesterday so here it is...

The view from our property. It was STUNNING unfortunately my photo is NOT!! What did I do wrong?? I used a tripod. I had the Aperture number high so it would all be in focus but it came out so flat. I fiddled with various shutter speeds. I've edited this but I'm just not happy with it. The sun was setting behind (I was freezing in the shade) and the last of the light was hitting the distance mountains and making them glow pink. There's little depth and it's just not sharp. If only you could have seen this view. It was breathtaking.

Any suggestions??? I'm so bad at landscapes.
maybe doing an HDR? still beautiful!
January 12th, 2013  
Beautiful
January 12th, 2013  
This is gorgeous. Wish I could help with the technical stuff. My point and shoot still does better sunsets/rises/flares than my Canon. I can't figure out why. The layers of colour on this are beautiful.
January 12th, 2013  
@agima! lets ask an expert!..I love your stunning view..i bet it has something to do woth the lighting lets see whay Brendan say's, :0)
January 12th, 2013  
@ellimae thanks for the call in.

KWind a couple of questions for you.

I guess the question is why does it look flat?
What make an image look flat against what we see in real life?

January 12th, 2013  
I do see what you mean but I'm not sure what to do to fix it. It's still a beautiful view!!
January 12th, 2013  
Sue
I see what you mean ... but can't help on the technical stuff, sorry. I still think it looks beautiful, what an amazing place to live!
January 12th, 2013  
@agima I suppose it looks flat because I'm taking something completely 3-d and making it 2-d. My issues are with the colours and depth. I've seen landscapes on here that feel like you can walk right into them. Are there tricks/tips I should be doing??
January 12th, 2013  
Beautiful!
January 12th, 2013  
I think it is beautiful... HDR would make it pop a bit more, but the colors are quite stunning!!
January 12th, 2013  
This looks fantastic to me (and I´m not just saying that) the colours are amazing, what a fantastic scene!
January 12th, 2013  
Do you know what brings depth to an image?
January 12th, 2013  
If not what do you think does?
January 12th, 2013  
@agima I'm not totally sure... the light?? colours?? using HDR???
January 12th, 2013  
Fav anyway mainly for colours.
January 12th, 2013  
@kwind The answer is contrast my friend, contrast. We see in something like 16 different contrast levels, and camera only sees in something like ( (depending on the model). This is why HDR is popular as it fills in the gaps between our eyes and the camera.

Look up S curve to get some more information on how you can do this, but I have did a quick change to your photo and increased the contrast.

Have a look here:
http://media.brendanmaunder.com/waterway.aspx
January 12th, 2013  
January 12th, 2013  
Okay... thanks. Contrast is the magic ingredient!! I like what you did to it. I'll do some reading. I appreciate the help... thanks again!
January 12th, 2013  
@agima @kwind Oh i see a big difference in increasing the contrast and funny thing as you probably can see in my own photo's i kinda steer away from alot of Processing and especially Contrast because i now so little about how it effected the photo..but again you have to realize that i have very poor eyesite also and im not making excuses i just refuse to wear glasses! They give me a headach! :) ..I will be doing more with contrast now! Thanks Brendan! This is all such great info for us novices ! :0)
January 12th, 2013  
this is stunning! fav!
January 12th, 2013  
@ellimae If you glasses give you a headache they are WRONG, go back and get different glasses....

Your eye site is very important...
January 12th, 2013  
Love the shot KWind.
January 12th, 2013  
Lyn
Kim, I see ribbons of pastels, here. . .the layers are just lovely. Please post it again somewhere if you try out the S curve and get something that pleases you more so we can all see how your "lesson" worked out!
January 12th, 2013  
@lyno I'll do my best, Lynn. I just need to find a little time to do the research.
January 12th, 2013  
I think this is gorgeous.
January 12th, 2013  
wow stunning
January 12th, 2013  
I think it is beautiful.
January 12th, 2013  
Roy
Lovely photo.. looking at the exif info I think your sharpness problem was probably your shutter speed, pretty hard to hand hold at anything under a 60th, especially if there's any kind of breeze...focal length set at 85mm makes it a little harder. f5.6 and 1/100th would have been a better bet.. still a lovely photo though :-)
January 12th, 2013  
@roycy I was using a tripod and it wasn't windy so everything was very stable.
January 12th, 2013  
Roy
ah well not that then... have no idea why it wouldn't be sharp then..??
January 12th, 2013  
Jim
Love the light and color on the distant peaks, and the graduated color of the sky. Beautiful image!
January 12th, 2013  
I think it's a nice shot. It's easy to overuse things like HDR; early in my project I would use lots of contrast and clarity adjustments to give the image a bit of a pop. Lately I've been steering away from these things as I feel the image can easily look over-processed.
January 12th, 2013  
so beautiful!
January 12th, 2013  
Beautiful colors!
January 12th, 2013  
I've had a few times like that with my D800 as well, it just does not behave as it should. On a related note, I just discovered today that the 10pin connector on the front has come loose and from some research, it seems to be relatively common. Just thought you should know/check it out as a fellow D800 user.
January 12th, 2013  
@jonesp Thanks for the info on the 10 pin connector. I just checked mine and it seems solid but I'll keep an eye on it!
January 12th, 2013  
Thats good to hear. I'm hoping they can fix mine before I fly off on my next trip!
January 12th, 2013  
Great colour tone and composition the detail throughout is stunning and looks like a touch of HDR?
January 12th, 2013  
I love it
January 13th, 2013  
I haven't read all the answers, btu I think that perhaps if you ahd something in the foreground, like some grass or rocks or something, that would give it depth and stop it from looking so flat. You could still do HDR to get it all exposed properly, but I think that having something in the foreground would help to lift the image. Just my opinion, but having said that I also think I suck at landscapes. Not enough practice is my excuse :)
January 14th, 2013  
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