welcome by northy

welcome

another *shot* at this... not sure this really gets closer to the surreal - but after 5 shoots i'm pretty fed up with the whole thing...

something lurking in my other album:
http://365project.org/northy/365/2013-11-11
Great composition
November 12th, 2013  
Oh that leaf is the perfect touch!
November 12th, 2013  
I think you nailed it the first time..but this us pretty darn cool too!
November 12th, 2013  
The size of the leaf indicates the size of the chair - I like the composition!
November 12th, 2013  
Oh, much better!!! I love how it looks like a perfectly normal scene until it hits that the other object is a leaf. Very cool shot now.
November 12th, 2013  
I've come back and come back to this one for a while now. It works, but hasn't got the wow of surrealism yet. I'm at a loss to explain why though. The only thing I can think of is that the chair and the leaf don't directly relate to each other, but I'm not an art scholar, so don't have the full grasp of it yet. I really wish I could be more constructive, Northy.

Have you read through these articles by Adam Marelli?
There are only five parts to them, there is no part four. http://www.adammarelliphoto.com/tag/surrealist-manifesto/

I hope they might offer a little something extra to give you that "aha" moment with this!
November 12th, 2013  
I really like this. I love your play with scale and the style of the chair as well as your composition. Nice work.
November 12th, 2013  
I think it's great!
November 12th, 2013  
Nicely composed - light vs dark background highlighting the subjects works very well. One thing you might want to try is to "De-tilt-shift" this shot :-) I mean, you can make life-size stuff look like miniatures by de-focusing the background and foreground --> miniatures should appear life-size if you bring background to focus = take another shot with the back wall in focus and combine the shots together.... Might work. Or not. :)
November 12th, 2013  
This looks more surreal because it's more obvious that the chair is not to scale.
November 12th, 2013  
At first sight it looks normal then the leaf upsets the realism - looks surreal to me!
November 12th, 2013  
I think this works better than the first one, something to do with the scale of the leaf and the chair. But I agree with @quixoticneophyte, in that the two don't relate to each other. I also agree with @janim about the composition which is delightful.
November 12th, 2013  
Oh yeah. This looks definitely GREATer!
November 12th, 2013  
This is super... just the loss of size understanding and the confusion as your eyes cruise the shot... what is that, which is out of place, its pretty awkward, so fabulous. Nice job!
November 12th, 2013  
Wonderfully surreal - think you've cracked it - FAV. Hope there'll be a series of them.
November 12th, 2013  
I think this is incredible, bravo x
November 12th, 2013  
The size comparison totally figured out. But I'm finding the background kind of dull and therefore not surreal - see where I'm going? Total points to you for trying this out and setting up different shots. I'm terrible at following through if it takes me more than a minute to do it! Oohhh..I just thought this next to a sewer grate - haha - with weird things stuck in the grates. Yeah, I'm totally going off on my own thought here. ;)
November 12th, 2013  
Wonderfully composed shot
November 12th, 2013  
@quixoticneophyte tx Alexander... makes for interesting reading... never took art classes and maybe i could use some ;p

@janim i do have some where the background was in focus, but they were garish on the eye... at first i thought it was the focus, but now i am thinking it may have been the choice of background along the lines of the point @kass was making... i have an idea for another attempt which i will see about working on later this week...

@kass not sure if the tenacity is my inherently perfectionist nature or just part of my way of avoiding reality for a while ;p
November 13th, 2013  
Love the comp! :)
November 13th, 2013  
that leaf is scaring the heck out of me. and the chair looks scared, too!!!
November 16th, 2013  
Beautifully composed and, yes, surreal shot that lets me create stories the more I look at it.
February 22nd, 2014  
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