No.127: David  by quietpurplehaze

No.127: David

Following the comments (with which I agree) by my good friend, Phil, @phil_howcroft on my portrait of David yesterday, I'm sharing this alternative photo.

Ideally I would like to put this background into the first photo!

Any further critique is welcomed.
Again a great portrait of David full of lovely detail and wonderful tones Hazel:)
November 20th, 2017  
another good one for sure
November 20th, 2017  
cool portrait
November 20th, 2017  
I am loving that hat!
November 20th, 2017  
Great shot...He has a nice, warm smile.
November 20th, 2017  
Fantastic portrait.
November 20th, 2017  
Yes I think this one works better but I agree the other one is better for the actual face part.
November 20th, 2017  
better by far Haze :) thanks for the mention.
If I can share one more tip , I might have cropped the are to the left of the yellow pillar out. The Pillar will then act as a stopper on the left hand side of the frame. At the moment the viewer want to look around the pole. Put your hand over the edge so you can see what i mean, it lifts the composition
November 21st, 2017  
@phil_howcroft @happypat

I think you are reading my mind Phil! Because I did do that crop but then discarded it! I still would use the other photo with the busy background as to me it's more 'David' than this one and I think Pat you are in agreement with me. It's good to get your critique, Phil, as not many folk on 365 seem to want to do it......
November 21st, 2017  
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