Following the comments (with which I agree) by my good friend, Phil, @phil_howcroft on my portrait of David yesterday, I'm sharing this alternative photo.
Ideally I would like to put this background into the first photo!
A small and belated September update for 2024, where I am still, after many years' membership, on 365 Project, also now posting elsewhere but wanting...
better by far Haze :) thanks for the mention.
If I can share one more tip , I might have cropped the are to the left of the yellow pillar out. The Pillar will then act as a stopper on the left hand side of the frame. At the moment the viewer want to look around the pole. Put your hand over the edge so you can see what i mean, it lifts the composition
I think you are reading my mind Phil! Because I did do that crop but then discarded it! I still would use the other photo with the busy background as to me it's more 'David' than this one and I think Pat you are in agreement with me. It's good to get your critique, Phil, as not many folk on 365 seem to want to do it......
November 21st, 2017
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If I can share one more tip , I might have cropped the are to the left of the yellow pillar out. The Pillar will then act as a stopper on the left hand side of the frame. At the moment the viewer want to look around the pole. Put your hand over the edge so you can see what i mean, it lifts the composition
I think you are reading my mind Phil! Because I did do that crop but then discarded it! I still would use the other photo with the busy background as to me it's more 'David' than this one and I think Pat you are in agreement with me. It's good to get your critique, Phil, as not many folk on 365 seem to want to do it......